Nowadays, technology has developed enormously and people should learn lots of skills during their lives. Changing technology affects every thing like industry, economy even life style and people's attitudes.
All different difficulties or problems will grew quickly with changing technology, so they have to keep pace with lots of changes.
As far as I'm concerned, in the past people used to live together simply, they used to work in farms and have their own businesses. They used to make money easily and it was sufficient to know about their single profession not multi-skill like today.
In contrast with living in the past, these days many companies and manufacturers attract multi-talented people for their jobs, so people with lower education and skills may lose their jobs. Hence it's quite impossible to get a good job without higher education and multiple skills, so people will have to have several careers and work for long hours to gain money for providing their families' desires.
I personally think jobs and careers are more technical and difficult than the past and so are earning money. It makes each person to learn lots of skills and knowledge for his/her own profession.
Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that education plays a crucial role in human's life. Many technical institutes are running for teaching and training. It's an opportunity to learn computer skills or other knowledge for people who want a better job and make good money.
Therefore, in my point of view along with education, technical skills can improve and people with higher qualification and extensive technical skills have a better chance to get good jobs and make good money and reach their goals.
This blog says about the importance of higher education and multi-skilled personnel. It is a relevant information that may inspire many people to continue their education and to acquire more skills that would make them a better person.
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