Nowadays, Traffic Congestion is one of the major problems of mega cities.During a day people are stuck in the heavy traffic and it's really boring.Every year millions of energy spent on.People suffer from some diseases and traffic jam causes lung cancer.In this article,I will be outlining Car production and Public Transportation as two major causes of traffic jam.
The major reason that leads to traffic congestion is Car Production. The high number of vehicles is caused by the population and the development of economy. For instance,in my country, there are some factories that produce some cars that have a low quality and people who aren't rich buy these vehicles;Therefore, the number of cars has increased and the citizens use their own cars. To solve this problem, the government should encourage people to use public transportation or make tax on private vehicles or restrict the number of vehicles for each family.These methods may be effective in fact.
Public Transportation is the second reason for increasing traffic. By having a high quality of public vehicles,people will be encouraged to utilize public vehicles instead of using their private cars.The government plays an important role on improving the quality and the number of public vehicles should be increased and they should make an investment in the traffic facilties. Namely, the public transport needs improvement to become more modern and convenient. In addition, it is useful to build overpasses and more lanes in the streets.
To sum up,In this article we discussed in the above set paragraphs that public transportation and car production are two major causes of traffic jam.To the best of my mind,Car Production is more important than Public Transportation because by reducing the number of cars,people are forced to use the Public Transportation.
Dear Mitra, [in paragraph 2] It's not true because our poor people buy more expensive car with worst quality and it's just a big stealing money from automobile company and government.
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To make the sentences more fluent and accurate, this is my suggestion:
ReplyDelete1)"the major problems of mega cities" -> "the major problems of MANY mega cities"
2)"vehicles;Therefore," -> "vehicles. Therefore,"
Punctuation is very important mate.
3)This is so aggressive "people are forced to use the Public Transportation" -> not academic
You can change to:
"people tend to use the public transportation more"