Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Writing Task 1 : The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

This diagram shows that how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects information on the weather for producing reliable forecasts. Before broadcasting any news or information, there are some steps to prepare information for example the weather report.

First of all, the Australian Bureau of Meteorology should gather some information via many ways or devices like satellite, radar, drifting buoy.

After gathering information, there is another step that is Analysis and forecasting. In this step, they should analyse
the information in some ways, they might use satellite photo, radar screen or synoptic chart for analyzing.

Next, they should prepare the broadcast with computers. So computers and maybe Internet would play a very important role in this process. They can edit and format news and publish it as well.

Then, news, the weather reports and etc can be broadcasted by T.V newsreader, radio, sometimes recorded announcement.
In a word, this is the steps for preparing up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

9 comments:

  1. Hi,

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    I was wondering if you could help me to write a better introduction and conclusion. I'm going to take an IELTS exam 3 weeks later.

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  3. Your writing has a very good structure. Together with the use of language they make your essay clear and stick to the main ideas of the topic. You have supporting data for things you have mentioned.

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  4. can I view a sample?

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  5. Your blog is well presented. However, you could have done it much better. You could have posted the picture for the writing task.

    In spite of that, this is a very good essay.

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  6. How about this answer?

    The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

    This diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up to date information on the weather to create forecasts which the public can trust. As shown, before the forecasts are broadcast, several steps are necessary to prepare the information for the weather report.

    First of all, the Bureau of Meteorology uses a number of devices in the field, such as satellites, radar and drifting buoys as primary sources of information. The information gathered in this way is then used to produce various types of visual representation, such as satellite photographs, radar screen images and synoptic charts, which are used to analyse the weather conditions and make forecasts.

    Subsequently, the forecasts are used to prepare the weather reports to be broadcast, and finally the information is transmitted to the public via various media, such as the television, the radio and recorded telephone announcements, so that accurate information is always freely available.


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  7. im positive you meant educated guess and not predictate what wheater will be

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  8. This is a good example of writing task 1.
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